Kerry dePenaloza
Mr. Leake
Writ 1133
16 April 2013
South Philly
This
past Sunday afternoon, a friend and I enjoyed a nice lunch at the location
restaurant known as South Philly. Upon
entrance to the establishment, the first thing we walked past was the bar and
the bartender was very friendly as we walked in. After passing the bar, we made our way
towards the blown up menu that is on the rear wall, which makes ordering
easier. Seeing as how the restaurant is
called South Philly, I most certainly order the delicious Philly cheese steak
sandwich that is offered here. My friend
and I then sat down at a table in the middle of the room. While waiting for the food to arrive, I
noticed the type of crowd that was at the restaurant. There were two groups of four, all young men,
eating sandwiches and drinking beer.
This observation led me to believe that this restaurant attracts a
younger male crowd for many reasons. For
one, they offer mostly food that is eaten without silverware, there were three
different sports being played on their televisions, and the atmosphere in the
restaurant has young college male written all over it.
The
food arrived within 10 minutes and it was hot and fresh and extremely
delicious. The French fires I ordered
were still sizzling from the fryer and the sandwich was fresh off the
grill. While eating my sandwich, a
question came to my mind. The Philly
cheese steak is a famous sandwich with its roots in Philadelphia. After this realization, I asked myself, “Why
are there always Philly cheese steak restaurants outside of Philadelphia?” With this question in mind, I wanted to do a
little research. In an article by Robin
Lee Allen, she talks about the development of the restaurant industry in
America. Among the things she talks
about, a section of it is about the infamous Philly cheese steak sandwich. Allen writes, “Brothers Pat and Harry
Olivieri of Philadelphia in 1930 created a grilled-steak sandwich with hot
sauce on Italian bread. A decade later
they added cheese, giving birth to the Philadelphia cheese-steak.” She stresses
the importance of this sandwich to the restaurant industry in America. The sandwiches became so famous that they are
now “offered widely in sandwich shops and chains nationwide.” (Allen). This certainly explains why there are places
in every city where one can purchase a Philly cheese steak sandwich. However, to experience the proper sandwich,
and Philadelphian will tell you where to go.
Something
else that I noticed about the restaurant South Philly was the layout of the
restaurant. When one first enters the
restaurant, the bar is the first thing they will pass. Seeing as how this place is a restaurant/bar,
why would the bar be the first thing you walk by. While there, I noticed a group of young men
eating food, when they all decided to get some beers from the bar. This observation was a large part of the
second question I asked myself while eating my sandwich. I wondered if the layout of a restaurant
subconsciously makes customers buy certain things. I wondered if someone comes into this
restaurant for a sandwich, how often to they persuade themselves to buy a drink
from the bar. Conversely, if someone
comes into the bar for a drink, how often do they persuade themselves to get a
sandwich, maybe after a few drinks?
Regardless of what anyone might say, the layout of a restaurant/bar is
extremely important to the success of the business. Most of the time, a place like this will make
a solid percentage of their earnings from the bar. I noticed that the bar had a large amount of
specials, which certainly adds to the idea of someone ordering a drink when
they only came for food.
Some
other things I noticed about South Philly were the type of atmosphere they were
creating. They were playing music that
was uplifting and enjoyable to listen to, but it was at respectable volume
level, which is nice because it is easy to carry on a conversation. Certainly the time of day, around 2pm on
Sunday, was not that perfect time to observe this restaurant in action. With the lack of people at the restaurant,
the staff was not very enthusiastic about working. However, when the bartender took our orders
he was very polite and seemed glad that we had decided to come to South Philly
for lunch. I can imagine that when the
restaurant is full of people that it could be a fun place to eat and have a
good time. The atmosphere of the
restaurant certainly backs me up when I say that it is a fun place to be and a
great place to get a Philly cheese steak sandwich in Denver.
If
you haven’t been to South Philly yet, I would highly recommend it. The food is delicious and they have such an
extensive menu you could eat there many time and not try the same thing
once. I’m glad that I chose this
restaurant for my observations. I have
never actually done something like this, but South Philly was a great place
because they made it easy to observe the establishment, employees, and
customers.
1. I found the observations regarding the positioning of the bar to be most interesting. It is interesting to think that the positioning of the bar could potentially lead to increased revenue from selling more beers if they were buying food, or more food if they were selling predominantly beers.
ReplyDelete2. The use of the outside source supplies background information on the origin and popularity of the Philly Cheese Steak Sandwich. This is the name sake of the restaurant as well as the dish ordered, so it holds a prevalent position in the blog post, and the background information is helpful in the reading of the piece.
3. A potential larger conclusion about food values is how businesses set their atmosphere to appeal to as many people, or the largest population possible. As is the case with South Philly Cheese Steak, where they are obviously appealing to young college men as pointed out in the essay, through the bar positioning, messy eating characteristic, multiple sporting games being watched, etc.
4. I would suggest maybe building off of the larger conclusion about food values and culture a bit more.
1. what field observations in the essay did you find most interesting?
ReplyDeletei think the field observation that i found the most interesting was the way that he explained the strategic layout of the bar right in the front. it definitely reminds me of how the stores put common bought items like milk, etc. in the back so that customers have to peruse all the other aisles in order to get what they want.
how does the outside source (sources) help interpret these findings or otherwise contribute to the essay?
the outside source talks a lot about the history behind the philly cheese steak sandwich and mentions why it has become more prominent in other stores now.
what larger conclusion about food values and culture does the author make, and how might you suggest refining this?
he definitely talks about the target demographic, younger males. he also talks about how culture ties into this and philadelphia. my suggestion is more detail on the food values: the culture portion was done well and the food values could use more expanding on.
any other suggestions or comments?
possibly try to incorporate more quotes or evidence from the source. i felt like it was contained in only one paragraph. i'd also probably tie the conclusion back to food values and culture.