Kerry dePenaloza
Prof. Leake
Writ 1133
20 May 2013
A Breakfast for Champions Manifesto
If you were to ask someone what they
thought the most important meal of the day was, chances are they would respond
with breakfast, and they would be right.
Breakfast is not only one of the most delicious meals of the day, but it
is extremely vital to your health both mentally and physically. Personally, breakfast has always been a part
of my life. When my older brother and I
were still in school back in St. Louis, my dad would always be the person to
prepare breakfast. When most people
think of breakfast, they think of bacon, sausage, eggs, pancakes, and waffles,
and that is exactly what I think of when breakfast comes to mind. My dad was always a fun cook when it came to
breakfast because the same dish was never served twice in a week. In the article “Breakfast and Your Health” in
Harvard Men’s Health Watch, the
author states, “the hearty feast of bacon and eggs that you may remember from
your youth is hardly a good start by today’s standards, and the doughnut and
coffee that have replaced it in today’s fast-paced world is no better.” Eating breakfast like this every day is not a
healthy way to live ones life. In order
to really appreciate what breakfast does to me and others, I need to fully
understand the health benefits of certain foods, and how I can eat the food I
want to eat, but at the proper amount. If I am able to do this breakfast will be
forever a part of my life and hopefully the lives of others.
Coming from a background where I
always had breakfast before school, I am amazed at the amount of people that
choose not to eat breakfast every day at the University of Denver. I have noticed it a lot more once I got to college
probably because I was never around my friends when they ate breakfast before
school back home. In Julie Deardroff’s
article “How to Eat Breakfast” she sums up the problem some people have with
breakfast by saying, “breakfast comes at a terrible time of day to make a
rational decision. We’re rushed, we’re
groggy, and we’re famished.” It seems
pretty obvious that in the morning, your brain is not quite awake, which would
account for someone making an irrational decision and skipping breakfast. As much as someone does not want to eat
breakfast, it is really something that should not be skipped. Unaware to some, breakfast does a lot more
then filling your stomach. Breakfast
fuels your brain, it maintains weight, and it provides much needed nutrition.
The fact that breakfast fuels your
brain may seem hard to believe at first, but when you think about it, it makes
plenty of sense. When you sleep, your
brain does not just turn off, in fact it is working the entire time. Your brain is working to drain its main
energy source, glucose, and breakfast is needed to replenish your brains
fuel. In Natalie Smith’s article “Breakfast’s
Benefits” she states, “A morning meal replenishes that energy supply. If you skip breakfast, you are left feeling
tired and irritable.” In this case, the
glucose gained from food is exactly like the gas for your car, both requires
food to work properly. It makes a lot of
sense that my dad always made sure I was well fed before I left for
school. After refueling my brain with a
great breakfast, I was able to focus more in school, succeed on tests, get good
grades, and overall just be ready to tackle the day ahead of me.
Along with fueling your brain, breakfast maintains weight. Some people may be “skip[ping] breakfast in
an effort to curb their daily calorie intake, but what they don’t realize is
that they’re usually doing more harm than good” (Smith). A known fact about weight loss is that you
need to burn more calories then you consume in a day in order to maintain a
healthy weight. Its understandable why
someone would think that avoiding the breakfast calories would benefit them,
however they tend to make poor food decisions due to hunger throughout the day
because of that decision. Simply eating
breakfast is not enough for a healthy lifestyle though.
In my life, I have always played sports after school and starting
the day with breakfast was always a necessity in order to perform well in
school all day and continue that performance into my practices and games after
school. As well as brain fuel and weight
maintenance, the nutrients that are provided by a healthy breakfast every day
are essential to a daily life. In Natalie
Smith’s article, she refers to the American Dietetic Association saying,
“According to the American Dietetic Association, children and teens who eat a
healthy breakfast are more likely to meet their overall nutrient requirements.” Many breakfast foods are high in many
essential vitamins and minerals such as calcium, vitamin D, iron and folic
acid. All are vital for a healthy life
and a productive day.
As a kid growing up, breakfast was never out of question. I feel that I can attribute a lot of my
success in school to breakfast. Starting
the day off with a complete breakfast really got me ready for the day. However, my breakfast eating habits have
certainly changed a little ever since I arrived to the University of
Denver. As I have gone through my first
year as a college freshman, I can certainly see my eating habits changing. I still have breakfast almost every day, but
sometimes I do not have morning classes, and because of this I sleep in and
sometimes miss breakfast. This is a new
thing for me and I can easily see the negative effects of skipping
breakfast. Also, the dorm cafeterias
have limited selection on healthier breakfast options, which are important to
have, I cannot be eating pancakes, bacon, sausage, etc. every day. Regardless of the excuses I make or others
make, breakfast is something that should never be skipped if possible. Natalie Smith talks about the American
Dietetic Association’s observations in her article “Breakfast’s Benefits.” According to the American Dietetic Association,
“more than half of male teenagers and more than two thirds of female teens do
not regularly eat breakfast.” This is an
astounding number to me. I guess it just
seems so surprising to me because of the fact that I was brought up with a meal
every morning. At school, some people
have some strange breakfast eating habits.
One thing that I have noticed, besides the fact that many people
skip breakfast, is the amount of people that do not eat breakfast, but drink
coffee or tea in the mornings instead. I
always have a cup of coffee if I have early morning classes, but it is part of
my complete breakfast. First off, if
someone is only drinking coffee, they are depriving their body of the necessary
nutrients. Simply drinking coffee pretty
much does the opposite of what a healthy breakfast does to your body. Once the caffeine wares off, the coffee can
leave you fatigued, in a bad mood, and even can lead to weight gain. It is important to eat breakfast along with
the coffee.
The key about breakfast is that there are some many unhealthy
things you can eat. It may be one of the
most important meals of the day, but it can also be one of the unhealthiest if
breakfast is not done right. The most
common mistake about breakfast is that people tend to eat too many simple
carbohydrates. Simple carbohydrates are
things like sugary cereals, white breads, and toast. Simple carbohydrates have an effect on the
body that results in a surge the body’s blood sugar levels. As science tells us, when blood sugar levels
get too high, the pancreas releases insulin.
According to “The Southern Reporter,” “the insulin removes sugar from
the blood and puts it into storage, primarily fat. The result is a decreased level of blood
sugar and a hunger for more carbs.” Simple
carbohydrates are a part of a lot of major breakfast foods and are some times
hard to avoid. Simple carbohydrates are
very prevalent and they can “leave you starving by 11 a.m. and craving sugary
foods” (DeCostole). In order to avoid
the inevitable release of insulin after eating food with simple carbohydrates,
a protein-based breakfast is an excellent substitute. The more protein-based diet provides
necessary nutrients and energy that is vital to the body, and at the same time
it avoids the increase in blood sugar ultimately limiting the release of
insulin. In regards of a protein-based
breakfast, “The Southern Reporter” states, “it helps to avoid a dependence on
carbs during the day and in this way, appetite stays under control and the body
uses stored fats to get more energy.” It
seems like the best choice to eat more protein-based breakfasts. Incorporating more fruits, protein, and good
oats is ultimately the best type of food for the most successful day.
The idea of having three square meals
a day has always been a part of my life.
As I have gotten older and more educated, the reason for having three
square meals has taken a new meaning with my understanding of how the body
works and what the body needs. However,
I never really thought much of the phrase “breakfast is the most important meal
of the day” until now. I always knew it
was important, but never this important.
After researching the idea of breakfast, I have learned a lot. Breakfast is something that should not be
treated lightly. I will be tailoring my
breakfast meals from now on in order to get the energy I need to get through
the day. I will be eating more
protein-based foods, more fruits, less simple carbohydrates, and always eating
when I drink coffee. It is imperative the
my brain be properly fueled for a long day of schoolwork ahead. I will certainly be getting up a few minutes
earlier in order to leave myself enough time to prepare a healthier breakfast
seeing as how the cafeteria does not supply the healthiest options. Breakfast will forever be a part of my life,
it is better to know the benefits at a younger age than to never have known
them at all.
Works Cited
“Breakfast and Your Health.” Harvard Men’s
Health Watch, Vol. 9, No. 7. February, 2005.
Deardorff, Julie. “How to Eat Breakfast: What
you eat in the morning can make or break your
day.”
Orlando Sentinel. August 18, 2009.
DeCostole, Jessica. “Eat this for Breakfast!”
Redbook, Vol. 208, No. 1, p. 56. January 2007.
“Feel Good
by Eating a Healthy Breakfast.” The
Southern Reporter Apr 13 2013.
ProQuest. Web. 22 May 2013
Smith, Natalie. “Breakfast’s Benefits.” Scholastic Choices, Vol. 21, No. 1, p.
18-20. September, 2011
1333 Extended Essay 2: Writing Workshop Peer Review
ReplyDeleteEssay Author: kerry depenaloza
Reviewer: keane lim
1. What do you understand to be the author’s food values?
From the title of the essay, it appears to be about why breakfast is so great.
From the last sentences of the introduction paragraph, the author's food values appear to be about understanding health benefits of foods and how to eat appropriate amounts of each.
2. How do those values relate to the author’s stated food choices and practices?
The food choices and practices relate to the author because he wants to understand how can he make breakfast tailored to him. He resolves this by saying that he will eat more protein foods and fruits. He will cut down on carbohydrates, and drink coffee with a complete meal.
3. What evidence and research does the author use to develop those food values and practices? How might that evidence and research be used more effectively?
He quotes Natalie Smith a lot in her article, which is great since she quotes the American Dietetic Association. This evidence leads to a lot of good professional research being added in the argument. He then researches the science behind the insulin loop and how it controls blood sugar, which we are lacking in when we wake up in the morning.
4. What part of the essay did you find most interesting and why?
I like how you talk about how a cup of coffee by itself is not good enough for breakfast. Many people swear by the benefits of coffee, but neglect that it should come with a meal as well. You said it best; it is only a part of a complete breakfast.
5. What part of the essay did you find most underdeveloped and why?
I thought the essay was well-developed and balanced everywhere. If I had to choose a place that needed some improvement, I would probably say the paragraph where you talk about the breakfast foods and how they contain essential vitamins and minerals. That area could use some expounding on, since the transitioning to the next paragraph seems a little abrupt.
6. What additional comments or suggestions for improvement can you offer?
I think that the essay is great, and you can spend more time polishing it rather than editing material. Some of the sentences read like lists, and there are a lot of run on sentences. Some of the transitions between thoughts in paragraphs could use rearranging. Some of the transitions between the paragraphs could be smoother, too. Good to see people advocating a healthily breakfast. Awesome title.